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A white ray of light was seen faraway at night. Peter and Susan, who were observing the starts, got terrified because of the strange light. Sudenlly...
They were really scared, and Peter wanted to see what happen in the place that the white ray of light crashed, because he saw fire in that place, but Susan didn´t want to Peter go there and....
ReplyDeleteShe started a discussion with Peter, because she didn´t want something bad to Peter, however he believed that this fire could be amazing and he just ignore Susan and went directly to the adventure.
ReplyDeletePeter decide to go the place were the strange light crashed, Susan has no choices that she had to follow Peter. When both get there they found a bright mysterious ball, that suprise them. And then....
ReplyDeleteSusan got so nervously that she decided to leave, even without peter she left the place. However Peter couldn't react, some kind of atraction was becoming from that bright misterious ball.
ReplyDeletePeter could not move. His breath stopped for seconds and his heart beated fastly. He did not blink and the only thing he did was watch at the bright ball of light that started to spleat into to parts very slowly.
ReplyDeleteThen, as soon as the light moved through the night, Peter hide himself behind a tree so he could see what was that shiny light in the midle of the dark
ReplyDelete"Don't hide from me, Peter!" said a gruff voice. Peter lifted up his eyes, and saw a great man leaned against a tree directly opposite him. Peter was extremely surprised, because he did not hear any one approaching and he was more puzzled with the fact that the stranger knew his name; and he was still more focused on observing, as well as the brightness would allow, the stranger's face.
ReplyDeleteThe stranger's face soon show himself as a man, owner of the ball who came with the neccessary equipment to catch the magnificent light ball.
ReplyDeleteThat stranger's face was from a very powerful man or at least that was it appears because he knows Peter's name and has something around her. After that Peter ask the man
ReplyDeleteknow his name and the strange's said: I'am Cosmojungle an intergalactical warrior with great heart, I've been observing you, studying you, your life, your parents, and
your curiosity called my attention a lot
When Peter heard those words he got calm and thought that he really was a warrior with great heart but suddenly the warrior bit punch him on the head and let him unconsious.
ReplyDeleteSusan was scared, but she decided go back with Peter.
ReplyDeleteShe called him, but he didn't answered. Now she was lost into the dark night
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ReplyDeletePeter started to wake up from his deep dream because he heard a voice calling him and finally stood up and went to look for his friend susan in the middle of that dark night only with the light of the moon
ReplyDeleteor almost thats what he thought...
ReplyDeleteSusan felt that she was walking in circles when suddenly she saw a light in the distance coming towards her, it seemed to be someone with a powerful flashlight that stumbled when walking.
She was afraid because she didnt remember that someone else lived in the vicinity, she was alone, helpless and hopeless ... who was that guy approaching to her?
"Peter? is that you? " (scream fearfully)
"Yes, is me Susan, Peter"- "We have to get out of here"- said the boy very exhausted and terrified.
ReplyDelete"You scared me a lot, where have you been? And what happen to your forehead?- said the girl curious about the hit.
"I can´t explain you everything with details but I can tell you that a man named Cosmojungle an intergalactic warrior beat me and left me unconscious but I woke up and I escaped from him and most likely he is searching me now.
Susan starts to laugh and make fun of what Peter told her.
"Peter are you sure that you feel good? You have not beaten with something in the way?
"I`m telling you the truth"- said Peter confused.
"I do not know maybe you´re trying to scare me making a joke with the light we saw in the cabin". "You planned it!"- bellowed the girl, she wouldn´t fell into his trap.
"But it´s truth, Susan!"
"I Don´t believe you!"
Suddenly a loud roar interrupted the conversation of both children. A heavy snowstorm was approaching the place where they were.
"What is that Peter?" shout the girl because of the strength of the eddy.
"I do not know!" said Peter.
Blizzard quickly became a vortex that flashed a strong light and this light appeared little by little, the whirlwind ceased to uncover the person responsible for all this noise.
"So here you are"- says the man approaching dangerously towards children.
"Susan run!"- shout Peter.
Run,run, run but Susan got attonished. Petter hit her and she woke up and starting running but she started running in circles, suddendly she saw a light and she went to the light, because Susan belived that was the exit to escape from that scaring thing but she continued running in circles. It was the ilusion of Cosmojungle who had the ability to creat allucinations and play with the mind of humans and Susan felt in to it.
ReplyDeleteEverything looked lost for Peter but suddendly Cosmojungle lost the concentration and the illusion dissapeared. Then appeared Pakata the Susan's cousing a tall man with blond hair who interruped Cosmojungle's meditation. This guide used to work in a fashion store during the day but during the day he was a punisher who punish bad men who were against the law. He had been a hero but nobody knew his secrets until now. This guide teleport himself and bring Susan back from the dimention where the illution sent her before. Peter was scared and Cosmojungle pissed off.Suddendly Pakata looked at Cosmojungle and challenge him. with his eyes he told him that want to fight. The fight was near to start...
ReplyDeletePakata is an intelligent and awesome boy who knows to resolve problems using common sence and phisical qualities that he has develop.
ReplyDeleteCosmojungle tries to create an hallucination to Pakata, but with a mirror Pakata blocks signals, and Cosmojungle is affected by its own power. Unable to counter-attack, runs to his brilliant spaceship, turns around and shouts: "I will return. " And the young guys could only saw a bright light which returning to the space.
Pakata sneaks into the trees leaving Susan and Peter alone, and the girl receives a hug of consolation after a rare adventure, but she fainted in the arms of Peter.
"Susan, Susan, get up to go to school, " shouts Susan´s mother. Susan washes her face, she looks in the mirror and realizes that this whole adventure was just a weird dream after a night of movies, ice cream and junk food.